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Importance: High Comments back fromm DEQ. Please review. E think the first four of their edits are worth considering. The last two are not as urgent to change in my opinion.

All — please find updated attached. This document includes edits from both Linda and Michelle. Thank you, Jennifer Eisner Public information Officer Michigan Department of Health and Human Services Office: 547-241-2112 or Eisner) @michigan.gov

xxxEND_PAGE:dhhs02_b0599_2193_2198_3 002196 Thanks Angela... have saved your version of the report to work from in the future... There will likely continue to be changes to the formatting as we add more cata, but Ill be sure to keep the logo on it. i have attached some cf my suggestions for the talking points. These gaing to be updated, | assume with each release of the report? There are a lot...Also, do we want to explain why 5ue/dL is our significant cut-off anywhere in the talking points or are the people receiving these pretty well-versed in the ways of lead by now? ><{{{'> <'}}}>< Michelle Bruneau, MA Michigan Department of Health & Human Services Project Manager & Health Educator (517) 335-8984 [email protected]

Wait! I's there..sorry...it’s at the top instead of the bottom... http://www michigan - Lead and your Body - Flint - no background 504124 7 odf?291510280809G2 Also set. i wish they would have renamed it before posting, but oh weil. ><{{{'> www michigan. gow! eatsafefish <'}}}>< xxxEND_PAGE:dhhs02_b0767_2685_2694_01 002686 Michelle Bruneau, MA Michigan Department of Health & Human Services Project Manager & Health Educator (517) 335-8984 bruneaum @michigan gov

Yes, you can. I’ve requested for if ta be put on the Flint Water website twice naw. i can follow up with them again. Angela

Hi all: I was just reviewing the DEQ Flint website....I'm guessing it's probably making its way thru the process, but if not - we might want to also include the 211 free filter message in the highlighted section at the top of the website where it mentions getting your water tested... Jim (GCHD) is cc'd on this email & can probably fill in any info gaps... Just a thought...thanks! xxxEND_PAGE:dhhs02_b0721_2549_2549_1

We might be able to get this out tomorrow. Just final review on our end. Angela

Updated and attached. Per Eden’s OX, I’ve alsa shared this with Toni & Genesee County's partners for comment with instructions to nat share externally until you've approved of it. Thanks! ><{{{'> mww.michiaan.gov/ eateatelish <'}}}>< Michelle Bruneau, MA Michigan Department of Health & Human Services Project Manager & Health Educator (517) 335-8984 bruneaum @michigan.gov

Sounds goad. | would prefer without the background. Looks better with the logas. Angela

Thanks Michelle, Bo we need to add that language to the infagraphic?

Hi all: Undated fact sheets are attached. If you could please replace the Flint Water fact sheet on the website (atin / Awww. michigan - Lead - Flint Water Fact Sheet 02 503394 7.ndf} with the one attached, that wauld be great. This one has the official Genesee Co logo, per their requast. Thanks! ><{{{'> www michigan.goy/ felish <'}}}>< Michelle Bruneau, MA Michigan Department of Health & Human Services Project Manager & Health Educator (517) 335-8984 bruneaum @michigan gov

Hi Michelle, The baby still loaks extremely pixelated. Can we clean that up? If you can send me the design file, we can try to clean it up in our office. As for the ‘Action Flint template’ are you referring to the Taking Action on Flint Water graphic the Governor’s office has been using? That's not a template for anything so no, we won't be using if or our materials. Thariks,

Hi Michelle, The baby still looks extremely pixelated. Can we clean that up? If you can send me the design file, we can try to clean it up in our office. AS tor the ‘Action Flint template’ are you referring to the Taking Actior on Flint Water graphic the Gavernor’s office has been using? That's not a template for anything so na, we won't he using ft on our materials. Thanks, Angela

Yes, that is fine. Please make sure they understand that this is not the final version, and they should not be distributing it until they receive the final. Thank you!

Sorry if it seems like we are being picky, but the people in the attached file look like they have a fuzzy border around them. it’s almost like the images were and cut and pasted from samething.